Autumn storm approaches Brisbane.
unexpected storm?
my sub-tropical city
fails to get me home
(shouldn’t a sub-tropical city expect the occasional storm and have a transport system that copes?)
City Storm
Poetry is my aeroplane
Autumn storm approaches Brisbane.
unexpected storm?
my sub-tropical city
fails to get me home
(shouldn’t a sub-tropical city expect the occasional storm and have a transport system that copes?)
So beautiful.
Thank you so much.
All the best,
– Gol
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Cheers Gol 🙂
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We’re HUGE haiku fans! Keep writing and we’ll keep reading!!
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Cheers. Haiku and Senryu are what I love most – I sometimes get sidetracked for a while, but I’ll come back to them all the time. Thanks for reading and I hope I can entertain you shortly 🙂
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I’m sure you will! Also, we’re unfamiliar with Senryu, but always ready to learn something new so thanks for the lesson.
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Senryu are almost the same as haiku except for their tone and subject matter. Senryu often don’t use a seasonal word, they are humorous, satirical, and usually poke fun at or point out the failings or mal-functions of society and often mankind as a whole. Have fun 🙂
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