Written in response to a Stanford University prompt to write new words (politically motivated) to an easily recognisable tune. I have chosen John Denver’s annoyingly catchy tune “Country Roads” (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1vrEljMfXYo).
Almost made it, across this ocean,
One more hardship, here comes the monsoon season.
Children die here, in their mothers arms
Will we find a nation, to stop this awful harm?
Ocean breeze, take me there,
To the place, I long to be.
Safe asylum
Distant refuge, take me there
On pure blue seas.
One more shoreline, shines before our eyes
The Christian people will surely grant our lives.
But dark ships stop us and point us back to sea,
Reject our arrival and more horrors we will see.
Ocean breeze, take me there,
To the place, I long to be.
Safe asylum
Distant refuge, take me there
On pure blue seas.
You surely hear our cries, in the evening while you’re dreaming?
We’re running for our lives, from our homes far away.
And in the morning as you pray before your morning meal
Remember that; but for the grace of God – there go you! There go you!
Ocean breeze, take me there,
To the place, I long to be.
Safe asylum
Distant refuge, take me there
On pure blue seas.
You have given the annoyingly catchy ‘Take me Home ‘ of Country Roads a new meaning.
Moving … accusing … niggles the conscience. What are we doing to help?
If you can get someone to sing this and post the words and matching pics .. might start a movement to assist them. Its plenty food for thought.
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I like the idea and it is a worthy cause… my son is a singer… I wonder…
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I hope you can do something with your vision of compassion …
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Reblogged this on Ramblin' Rose and commented:
Andy Mersdon has penned some inspiring words – Asylum Roads – to be sung to the tune of what he calls the annoyingly catchy tune ‘Country Roads’ by John Denver .
It really highlights the plight of refugees risking their lives to a place they long to be …
ocean breeze, take me there
To the place, I long to be.
If we can’t help in any other way, let’s at least whisper a prayer daily for those on the high seas today leaving everything behind in search of asylum, refuge, freedom.
Safe asylum, distant refuge
Take me there
On pure blue seas.
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Cheers, Rambling Rose
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Does not seem to come correctly when I reblog … big gaps and only first para. Is that the way it is supposed to be. Have not reblogged before !!
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Rambling Rose, I have only reblogged a couple of times and I just used the ‘reblog’ button. Maybe the problem is that I posted this from my “Evernote” work book? Not a Word document. Thanks for trying and sorry I cant help… I’m slightly technically challenged 🙂
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Very powerful!
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Cheers Lisa. I am loving your blog 😊
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Well thank you Andy 😀
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My pleasure 🙂
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