Warning – I have use a piece of language in this poem that may offend some. Β I have not done it gratuitously and for those of you who have ever been in ‘the dark place’ you will understand that no other work can carry the necessary emotion.
So please if the use of such a word will offend you, I ask you to read no further.
Here goes…
Gimme some space –
Some elbow room.
Time to fuck this up
In my own special way.
I don’t need your advice –
Your thinly veiled suggestions.
Criticism is my razor
When I’m feeling this way.
Holds true when you need your space..ππ
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Thanks Neethu π
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If someone has made you feel this way, I hope you have directed their attention to this output. π Then again, sometimes just being able to vent is as good as complaining face-to-face.
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There is a bit of venting and direction will follow π
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Thanks for taking the time to read my work. I am enjoying checking out your site too π Kind regards, Andy
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I will follow you if your on twitter, I like your poetry…. ππ
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Andy Smerdon @smedrothefish π
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I will do… Mine Lynda Rose @xxsunnystarxx. Thank you will try now ππΆπ π
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