Once again I have used a word that some may find offensive, so please don’t read further if you think you may be offended. I have not used the word gratuitously and I believe that without the word, the character of the senryu would be softened and it’s impact significantly reduced. If you choose to leave I understand and wish you all the best; if you read on, I hope you find the piece meaningful. Kind regards, Andy.
Poetry is my aeroplane 
VERY NICE
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Thank you! 🙂
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So true, pain is less when shared.
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I love sharing pain.
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sometimes I think that is what I am doing by writing and posting some of my poetry 😉
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I wonder what the catalyst was for this outpouring…
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everybody has a little pain in their life eh? Fortunately not all of us are subjected to daily torment.
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👍👍👍
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Thanks Neethu 🙂
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Sharing pain together also brings people together.I think people bond more closely when they are facing a disaster rather than when they are celebrating together.Don’t you think so?
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Sometimes I think that we develop a deeper relationship when we are facing troubles together. We depend upon each other and this builds a trust which I think is very important in any relationship. I think some pain is a very personal thing and we can only share it with somebody we trust. Thanks for reading Akshitha 🙂
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