15 comments on “Treasure Chest

  1. As Maha said, this is a deep poem. Seems like there’s a sombre kind of tone to it. Sometimes we want someone or something to tell us because it can be hard to make sense of feelings or what we feel. Then maybe we can find some clarity and feel at peace. Also, thanks for sharing a great live music at the end.

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    • Glad you liked the music Mabel. Sometimes I know that I can feel empty and I need somebody to point out the beauty and snap me back to reality. Thanks for always reading and commenting 🙂

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  2. Sometimes the mind feels like a vacuum. Everything seems tangible but, still we find it difficult to perceive. A hollow state. I sense a tone of pathos in the lines but like the optimism in it…to regain the composure with the help of Mother Nature… 🙂

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  3. Very nice.This feeling of hollowness at times nags you with gnawing persistence and it takes a tremendous effort to shake it way . Isolation sets in despondency and company helps us to tide over it . You have expressed these feelings so well at the same time defined the need of well meaning friends who are a constant source of your happiness and peace.

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    • Thanks Veena 🙂 Yes our close friends seem to understand when we need to hear a joke or a song, or take a walk on the beach… friends and nature – I love them both 🙂 Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, it is greatly appreciated.

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