23 comments on “One Quiet Night

  1. The poem has a soft and soothing appeal.The silver orb with golden beam stealthily moving to secluded dark places and to be a witness to love pure and sublime. It is beautiful with almost a divine aura.

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  2. The poem has a soft soothing appeal.The silver orb with golden beams stealthily lightning the darkened places .Also it is a witness to love pure and sublime .It creates an aura almost divine. This piece is truly beautiful .

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  3. Beautifully done, Andy. The moon can certainly make things romantic, especially a full moon like the one you showed in your photo. Round, full and bright, full of light and life and so we feel that anything is possible, that true love til the end of time is very much possible πŸ™‚ My favourite line was, “super-moons light our path and story”, and then that line that follows is so apt. There is always light in darkness when we least expect it. Hope you are well and it’s all good in your part of town πŸ™‚

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    • Thanks Mabel – all good here, I hope you are well (and warm) in sunny Melbourne πŸ™‚ I started this poem on the night of the super-moon here in Brisbane. We had been for a walk along the beachfront and so many families and couple were sitting on the beach and the grass waiting for the moon to rise – the moon wasn’t the only inspirational thing that night πŸ™‚

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  4. Hi, your composition is beautiful. It has a soft soothing effect. The silver orb with its golden beams stealthily illumining the realm below is beautifully expressed.Amidst all the beauty pure chaste love flourishes just sublime.In all it creates an aura divine.

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  5. i waited for the super moon that night. maybe i wanted something to inspire me to write that night. there was too much and too many goin on in my heart that evening and i wanted it out through my written work …. but i just can’t . i was hoping the super moon would give me that spark i needed. but damn.. it rained so hard in our place.

    and i am just so delighted someone across the globe somehow did it for me.

    beautiful piece.. and oh i am happy i found at slasher monster

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