a harem of stars
while sea-mist veils the pre-dawn
Venus holds my heart
sunrise promises splendour
only one can claim my love
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Beautiful Andy, that would be a hard choice to make. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment Mr Mel – a tough choice indeed… but you are only allowed one ….. 😉
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Sunrise, for with sunrise come the day, followed by the night, and I know I have a date with Venus!
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Sweet 😊
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The phrase ‘harem of stars’ has been wonderfully used, Andy! Lovely composition… 🙂
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Thank you Mani – the phrase came to me as I walked the dog along the foreshore at dusk and Venus was shining the brightest amongst a plethora of stars,not was an almost breathtakingly clear evening 😊❤️
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I agree with Mani. ‘harem of the stars’ is used so beautifully. There is something so magical about that time just before the sun goes up and down…in a way, we can’t control it and it’s like we’re seeing magic right before our eyes. Hope all is well with you, Andy. Winter is in full force over here.
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Thank you Mabel – dawn and evening are my favourite times too. March next year we go to Iceland and it will not only be very cold, but we may see the midnight sunset 😊. That will be special. Stay warm, only about 80 days until spring 😉
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Hope you get to go to Iceland at some point, and maybe you can see the Northern lights 😊 Yes, spring and summer is almost upon us now 😊😊
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Lovely!
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Beautiful,Must be something in the air a fairly significant day for us as well.
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Surrounded by a harem of beauty! Only one, the exceptional one can claim
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Yes – just the one… Only 😊
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So beautiful!
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Thank you Tina 😊🙏. I am glad you think so.
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Only one can claim my love…profound. Love it.
XxX
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Thank you Patty 🙂
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