In the half light
Of a veiled sunrise,
Trees bow and sway
With anticipation.
The eastern horizon
Bruised and mouldering
Prepares the cloud bank -
Nimbus - dark and laden.
At bus shelters and train stations
Young women fight to control summer skirts
And young men pretend not to notice,
While trying to keep their hairstyles in place.
The mood is grey
The threat of rain is real
We retreat within ourselves -
While the flowers remain bright yellow.
golden flowers shine
unapologetically
through my somber times
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Absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you 😊
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Beautiful write, Andy. Love how you slowly painted the approaching rain and darker weather bit by bit. Very clever use of visuals and words to draw us in. Beautiful flower shot too. Interesting way to end it, and it sounds like a positive note – amidst all the sombre and melancholic tones which seems to come across in a lot of your poems. I suppose those of us who are obliged to see the positive side of things will always find a way to make it through to another day. Hope you have a good week ahead. After a couple of 30’C+ degree weeks, we are back to 20’C for the start of summer 😞😂
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Cheers Mabel. I know that you will always see the positive in everything and I am thankful that you point it out to me 😀🙏. I enjoyed writing this one and it has had a couple of iterations before I put it up. The flower is from the Cotton Tree, which is a typical coastal tree here in Queensland and grows all the way along the beachfront where we walk 😊. I love it’s brightness and its fragility. Stay warm Mabel – hope the weather improves for you. I hear it is flooding down your way. 😳
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Good one Andy loved the build up of the storm, the real thing last night was impressive to.
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Thanks Dad. We only got thunder and a little rain – better result the afternoon as far as rain goes 👍
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Such a beautiful description of the moment, Andy! I could feel the strong, moist wind. It shows how vividly you watch even the quotidian life from a poetic point of view. Kudos!
I simply loved the picture. The bright yellow ❤
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Thanks Mani 😊🙏. I am very happy that you liked it. I do look at things in a slightly different way to regular observers I think. Sometimes I say something to my wife or friend about a scene and they look at me blankly. I think you see the same things as me Mani – your poetry shows me that 😊. Blessings to you and your family from Australia 🙏😊
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Slow build up ..really enjoyed the weather with your words
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Thanks Akhila – glad you enjoyed it 😊🙏
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Marvelous, Andy. Profound message underneath; how dark it might seem, there is always some beauty-ness to find 😉
XxX
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Thanks Patty – Nature is beautiful in all her guises 🙂
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You paint the scene beautifully !!! iloved observing the happenings at the bus -shelter .. Young loves and young lives always bring a smile … a captivating scene in the midst of an impending storm ….
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