About Last Night

Posted by andysmerdon on July 18, 2020
Posted in: Haiku/Senryu, Poetry. Tagged: , , , , . 9 Comments 
(a clutch of Haiku)
I saw a flower 
Break beneath a waxing moon 
It was her first time 


*


I misunderstood 
And find I should have cared more 
I breakfast alone 


*


The sheets do belong 
To the one who deserves them 
She recalls my name 


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In a certain light 
I am considered handsome 
We make love at night

*


Through a web of joy 
We dance the tarantella 
two crazy lovers 

9 comments on “About Last Night”

  4. As the others have said, this is a great poem. So many up and down emotions that come with love and lust. Hope you are doing alright over there in Queensland. Certainly seems warm up there 🙂

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